Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money other public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Presently, in many countries,
art
is considered as an important matter, and is subsidized by the
government
.
However
, some put the value of
art
under question, citing authorities should stop
this
help and investigate other public services
instead
.
Nonetheless
, it seems to me, a
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Suggestion
the arts
can significantly influence societies, and
therefore
, artists should be supported. All kinds of arts,
such
as painting, music, dance, theatre and cinema are able to express and convey the feeling of the artist and the society throughout time and space, which fact-based articles and books are unable to transfer. It can
also
function as powerful means of communication between different cultures and languages, as they have numerous common sensations to share.
For example
, all people in the world can understand and relate w
ith
Suggestion
to
music.
Finally
, it usually, stimulates the imagination and creativity capabilities of both composers and audience.
This
could result in success even in other aspects of life.
However
, critics insist even in case of accepting the values, supporting by the
government
may disrupt the artist's i
ndependency.
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
That is
to say, the
government
, probably, helps only some specific proponent productions, and other compositions would,
thus
, be deprived.
As a r
esult many
Accept comma addition
result, many
artists may change or censor their opinions and views to gain the
government
incentives.
This
may lead to weak and superficial
art
works unable to convey t
rue perception.
Suggestion
a true perception
the true perception
Examples can be seen in m
edieval era,
Suggestion
the medieval era
which only religion-based arts were supported by the church, and arts based on other beliefs could not achieve any interest.
On the other hand
, supports point out, artists, usually, do not have another way of living, meaning without sponsorship they unable to survive, and
therefore
, many fine arts would never be made. They conclude it is the officials' responsibility to support
art
composers, so that they can focus entirely on producing high-quality works. To sum up, the society is benefited dramatically from
art
,
such
as registering and transferring profound feelings, sharing common sense through the world, and positive impacts on people's mind. I take the view that, all types or arts and artists should be subsidized by the
government
.
Nevertheless
, we should be aware not to interfere the i
ndependency
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
of artists.

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