You have been offered a job, asking you to start next week. You want the job very much but, because of a previous commitment, you want to delay the start for another two weeks. Write to the Manager, accepting the job, but explaining your situation and asking for the change to your start date.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to officially accept the job offer and I am looking forward to serve your organization.
However
, because of my previous commitments, I will be available not
sonner
comparatives of 'soon' or 'early'
sooner
than two weeks. Let me explain my situation. I am currently working in key role and my current employment requires me to give two weeks notice period as per my contract. I would request you to reconsider my joining date and change the joining date if possible. I am sorry for any inconvenience
this
may cause. I am excited to join your team and learn from your expertise. I will prove myself to be an asset to
this
organization and to your team. I will ensure to bring all the required credentials on joining date. I am hopeful that you will understand my situation and consider
this
request
favorably
showing approval
favourably
. Thank you once again for considering me and giving me
this
opportunity to serve. Sincerely yours, Junaid
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