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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

#wednesday #london #vancouver #home #hand #luggage #plane #airline #bag #contents
Dear sir/Madam, I would
like
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tolike
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 report a lost property in the airport. On the
last
 Wednesday, 10th January 2020 flew from London to Vancouver flight number SQ 728, (seat 25A) though it was
long
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a long
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 flight and unfortunately
i
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I
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 had left my hand luggage on
cabinet
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the cabinet
a cabinet
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. As
this
 was
very
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a very
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 ordinary bag and
maker
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the maker
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 of Samsonite tagged on it.
This
 was
black
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a black
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color
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colour
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 bag with a small side pocket on it and inside some books, my personal diary and my red jacket. There was a small
pad lock
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padlock
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 including
combination
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a combination
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 of
number
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numbers
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 to open. Though my diary
which
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apply
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contains some more valuable contact details that might be very
import
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 for me. Appreciate
if
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it if
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 you locate
this
 bag and let me know how
i
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I
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 will get back
this
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youthis
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. My email ID: [email protected] I am looking forward to your reply Many thanks
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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