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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many people in opinion that
music
 is a good way to unite people of different age and
culture
.
Conversely
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 argue that narrative. In the scope is
this
 essay
,
Accept space
,
 both the views will be thoroughly discussed and I completely agree to
first view
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the first view
.
Music
 is a thing which gives you pleasure. It has no boundaries and no limits to generation.
Many
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Much
 of the
culture
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music culture is
music
 is part of their religious processions while they are praying. In many of occasions like wedding people organised
music
 function to gather people and celebrate their happiness.
Music
 is
link
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linked
 with people feeling and in their low mood they love to listen
music
. Even
toddler
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a toddler
sometime start
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sometime starts
 dancing despite not understanding the lyrics of songs.
Music
 has
soothing effect
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a soothing effect
, its rushes your blood to compel to dance if succeed to touch your insight soul. Nowadays singers are performing outside country performance and represent their country and
culture
. Me and some of friend of have common
music
 liking
that is
only way
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the only way
 of bonding between us
On the other hand
 people opine that
music
 is just wastage of time and it's damage the
culture
 of
local area
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the local area
, young to old have different preference to listen
music
 but I got the opportunity to attend foreigner concert in our country and found every generation was enjoying. To conclu
de
Accept space
,
 ,
music
 is another name of pleasure, many of people have different
culture
 an
d preferences b
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preferences, but
ut
music
 i
s fundamental fact
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the fundamental factor
a fundamental factor
or to bring them closer

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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