The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate how a
wind
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turbine is structured in order to generate electricity and its possible locations. Looking at the details in the first pictorial, the apparatus comprises three blades made
by
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fiberglass
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or wood which are placed on top of a steel tower. The
wind
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blows towards the compounded blades and imprints
them
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rotational
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movements which produce an output of 1.5 megawatts
throughout
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a generator connected to them. The sensor placed
next
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to the blades is controlled by a computer situated not far away from the
wind
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turbine.
Due to
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this
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connection, the speed and direction are maintained within the normal range. Regarding the possible placements, there are 3 options and each has its own benefits.
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a turbine mounted on the top of a hill will receive the utmost
wind
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strengths
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, the one situated under
the
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sea level does not have the same advantage but it does not affect the landscape. There is
also
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the domestic location but
this
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variety attains a yield of only 100 kilowatts.
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it can be seen that the
device'
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design is simple and there are 3 potential places for their establishment.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wind with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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