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Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, technology
such
 as TV and
video
 games are mainly watched and played
vy
Used in specifying adjacent dimensions
by
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
Although
, others believe that, it harms the mental health
problem
 of children. I partially agree
to
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with
this
 statement. In today's generation, games and television are the sources to learn new things and improve
ability
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abilities
the ability
.
Firstly
, children
develop
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develops
 their minds by playing
video
 games and learn to develop skills.
Additionaly
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Additionally
, by watching
television they
Accept comma addition
television, they
 can get extra knowledge about different types of activities. They can learn more than their additional books by which they can develop their knowledge and skills.
For example
, by playing
video
 games
such
 as cheese they can increase
there
of them or themselves
their
intelligency
the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
.
Hence
, It is the effective way to improve the brain of
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
Although
, the habit of playing for long hours can create
mental
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mental problems
a mental problem
problem
 on their mind.
watching
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Watching
 television and playing
video
 games makes them lazy and addicted which gives
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on health. In different
countries these
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countries, these
technology
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technologies
 had
maily
for the most part
mainly
affect
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affected
 on children mental
problem
. In conclusion, the ability of children is improved by watching T.V and playing
video
 games,
however
 the addiction in these may harm on
children health
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the child's health problem
child's health problem
children's health problem
child health problem
problem
.

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