Car owner ship has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

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Nowadays
,
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,
most of the people liked to go
by
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with
their own cars
instead
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of public
transport
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because of
this
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car
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ownership has increased so rapidly over
past 3 decades
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the past 3 decades
all over the world.Increased number of cars caused
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traffic
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a traffic jam
traffic jams
the traffic jam
jam
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.I think
this
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is true
,
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,
as a result
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of
,
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,
more cars
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the more cars
there may be
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traffic
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a traffic jam
jam
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.To reduce
this
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problem
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government could take some strong decisions it could
reliable
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reliably
to people.
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Traffic
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The traffic jam
A traffic jam
jam
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is the biggest
problem
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that all people face daily.To get
this
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problem
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there may be various reasons
in
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on
that one is
car
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ownership
,
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,
it is rapidly
increased
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increasing
over
last
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3decades
,
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,
and it may rise
further
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.Because automobile companies
are produce
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are producing
produce
are produced
cars according
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cars, according
to customer desire and budget.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
all may
affordable
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afford
to purchase cars.Some remote places the public
transport
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may not reach to people requirements so they may prefer to buy a own
car
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to reach their working place on time.I believe that increase of cars it could be
major cause
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a major cause
the major cause
to get big
traffic
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jam
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.
However
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,
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,
to reduce
this
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problem
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the government could take some strong decisions.
First
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and
formost
ranking above all others
foremost
is
expansion
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an expansion
the expansion
of the streets to reduce
traffic
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congestion and
also
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they could plan about flyovers.
Secondly
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,
government
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the government
could give some facilities to attract people to choose public
transport
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as faster and more affordable services.
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last
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Last
but not the least
,
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,
fixate heavy
taxtion
charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
taxation
over
car
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owners and automobile companies
,
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,
because of
this
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people
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person
may drop their ideas to purchase cars. Sum up
,
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,
it is true that increase of
car
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ownership made big
traffic
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jam
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over the past 30 years.To reduce
this
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problem
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.
Government
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The government
could take some decisions as taxation, expansion of streets and
also
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could give offers
to people to attract
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to attract people
on public
transport
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.
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