The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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diagram is highlighting the ratio of men and women that were enrolled in different courses in the united kingdom in 2011. as a general trend the number
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the girls dominated the remaining subjects by reasonably little variation compared to boys except in the instances of philosophy where the difference went up reaching 100.
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