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Today more and more people are visiting places where condition are difficult such as Sahara and the Atlantic.What are the benefits and disadvantages for the tourists.

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Over the past years
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there ahas been
significant increase
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a significant increase
 in the number of tourists all around the world. Among that
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 nowadays more people are attracted to visit hostile area
such
 as
Sahara
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the Sahara
 and The Antartica.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages for
this
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these
 tourists. To commence with, the major advantage of travelling to remote area is that individuals can enjoy great and breathtaking scenery that may not find in any other places. Usually people take a trip to explore their life and experience the nature
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though, visiting these
type
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types
 of places help to experience a different face of nature beauty.
For example
, the visit to the Antarctic provide a frozen image of nature with various animals that cannot see in any other countries.
In addition
 to that
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,
these adventurous
journey
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journeys
 could make the individual physically and mentally confident and
strongby
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strong by
 handling various risky works. On the flip side
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these difficult journey can be extremely dangerous and things may go
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against
 the plan. People sometimes become over excited and tries risky activities which is challenging for their life.
For instance
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there are a lot of incidents where people died and injured due to adventurous activities like trekking and rafting. Another drawback of
such
 journey is that the visitors may face various health problems due to extreme weather conditions.
For example
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many persons are interested to climb mountain like Mount
Everest but
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Everest, but
 failed and withdrew because of weather. To conclude, even though
travelin
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
g to remote areas gives memorable moments it is
dange
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a danger
r to the life of humans
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