Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Recently,
variety
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a variety
of
language
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languages
has been diminished, why, some of them have
die
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died
out.
Although
some people believe that life will be more comfortable without different
language
, I reckon, we should make
plane
extensive tract of level open land
plain
to preserve them as well as possible. Some people say, it is not important to make
effort
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an effort
the effort
efforts
to save different
language
, why the think with decreasing the linguistic diversity, communication among people will be improved, in other word if unpopular
language
die
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
, people will have to learn the same
language
and conversation will be organized better.
In
addition
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addition, this
this
approach
think
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thinks
, by fewer languages, the related-expenditure of will
also
be less. In fact, not only is it not necessary to pay money for protecting languages again extinction, but
also
, the cost of education will
also
be reduced dramatically.
On the other hand
, I think different languages are the root of diverse cultures which have existed until now. In other word with ding out a
language
, a culture is ruined inevitably. And
also
, it is clear that, beauty of
world
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the world
depend
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depends
on various cultures and its specific features. Take as an illustration different
civilizations
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civilization
along the history have been formed by distinct cultures,
in addition
without understanding the cultures, perception of civilizations is not possible, and
furthermore
,
language
is the main way of realizing the cultures.
Moreover
, I suppose, like a tree that never grow without its roots, a hardly could a society
also
progress without its languages and roots. In conclusion, I could infer,
however falling
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however, falling
in diversity of
language
may reduce the cost totally, they act as a
roots
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root
of a society and without them a community will never be able to promote.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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