The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the data on the operational
year
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,
length
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of
network
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in miles and
number
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a number
the number
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of commuters
traveling
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travelling
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annually in millions by the underground
railway
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in six cities across the world, namely
London
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, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC,
Kyoto
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and Los Angeles.
Overall
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, the
London
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underground
rail
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network
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is the oldest and the longest one,
while
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Kyoto
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's
network
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is the latest and shortest
amongst
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all. Meanwhile, Tokyo's
railway
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network
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is the busiest among them.
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with, the
London
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underground
railway
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network
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is the oldest one established in the eighteenth century, in the
year
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1863. The rest of the
railway
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networks became operational in the
nineteenth-century
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with Los Angeles's latest addition in the
year
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2001. In terms of the
length
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of the
network
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,
London
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has the largest route covering 394
km
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of distance in total, which is almost twice the
length
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of the
second
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-largest
rail
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system, which is in Paris. The
length
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of the route in Tokyo and Washington DC stands at 155 and 126
km
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. Los Angels have 28
km
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of
the
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rail
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network
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,
while
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Kyoto
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is at the bottom of the list at 11km. Among the number of commuters
traveling
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travelling
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annually by the underground
rail
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network
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, Japan has
busiest
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the busiest
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with 1927 million using
this
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transport system, followed by Paris,
London
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,
Washington
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and Washington
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DC. Meanwhile,
Kyoto
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has
least
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the least
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number of commuters taking
this
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route per
year
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at 45 million.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, length, network, railway, london, kyoto, rail, km with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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