The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the data on the operational
year
, length
of network
in miles and number
of commuters Change the article
a number
the number
traveling
annually in millions by the underground Change the spelling
travelling
railway
in six cities across the world, namely London
, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto
and Los Angeles.
Overall
, the London
underground rail
network
is the oldest and the longest one, while
Kyoto
's network
is the latest and shortest amongst
all. Meanwhile, Tokyo's Change preposition
among
railway
network
is the busiest among them.
To begin
with, the London
underground railway
network
is the oldest one established in the eighteenth century, in the year
1863. The rest of the railway
networks became operational in the nineteenth-century
with Los Angeles's latest addition in the Correct your spelling
nineteenth century
year
2001.
In terms of the length
of the network
, London
has the largest route covering 394 km
of distance in total, which is almost twice the length
of the second
-largest rail
system, which is in Paris. The length
of the route in Tokyo and Washington DC stands at 155 and 126 km
. Los Angels have 28 km
of the
Correct article usage
apply
rail
network
, while
Kyoto
is at the bottom of the list at 11km.
Among the number of commuters traveling
annually by the underground Change the spelling
travelling
rail
network
, Japan has busiest
with 1927 million using Correct article usage
the busiest
this
transport system, followed by Paris, London
, Washington
DC. Meanwhile, Correct word choice
and Washington
Kyoto
has least
number of commuters taking Change the article
the least
this
route per year
at 45 million.Submitted by ramakhh15 on
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