The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the data on the operational
year
, Use synonyms
length
of Use synonyms
network
in miles and Use synonyms
number
of commuters Change the article
a number
the number
traveling
annually in millions by the underground Change the spelling
travelling
railway
in six cities across the world, namely Use synonyms
London
, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Use synonyms
Kyoto
and Los Angeles.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
London
underground Use synonyms
rail
Use synonyms
network
is the oldest and the longest one, Use synonyms
while
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Kyoto
's Use synonyms
network
is the latest and shortest Use synonyms
amongst
all. Meanwhile, Tokyo's Change preposition
among
railway
Use synonyms
network
is the busiest among them.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
London
underground Use synonyms
railway
Use synonyms
network
is the oldest one established in the eighteenth century, in the Use synonyms
year
1863. The rest of the Use synonyms
railway
networks became operational in the Use synonyms
nineteenth-century
with Los Angeles's latest addition in the Correct your spelling
nineteenth century
year
2001.
In terms of the Use synonyms
length
of the Use synonyms
network
, Use synonyms
London
has the largest route covering 394 Use synonyms
km
of distance in total, which is almost twice the Use synonyms
length
of the Use synonyms
second
-largest Linking Words
rail
system, which is in Paris. The Use synonyms
length
of the route in Tokyo and Washington DC stands at 155 and 126 Use synonyms
km
. Los Angels have 28 Use synonyms
km
of Use synonyms
the
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apply
rail
Use synonyms
network
, Use synonyms
while
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Kyoto
is at the bottom of the list at 11km.
Among the number of commuters Use synonyms
traveling
annually by the underground Change the spelling
travelling
rail
Use synonyms
network
, Japan has Use synonyms
busiest
with 1927 million using Correct article usage
the busiest
this
transport system, followed by Paris, Linking Words
London
, Use synonyms
Washington
DC. Meanwhile, Correct word choice
and Washington
Kyoto
has Use synonyms
least
number of commuters taking Change the article
the least
this
route per Linking Words
year
at 45 million.Use synonyms
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