Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

As they say, nothing comes free. Everything we do there is always strings attached
with
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it, pros and cons, boon or bane and advantages or disadvantages are the kind of variables that one has to always
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brick that is laid sideways at the top of a wall
cope
with.
Indeed it
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Indeed, it
is true that being a
celebrity
is not easy by any means, living always in a limelight doesn’t mean happiness, sometimes, it becomes unbearable, tormenting and tiresome. All the media, press and fans follow you 24/7. The concepts of privacy and personal vanish away from one’s
life
, as soon as one becomes a
celebrity
. Workload and lack of time for friends and family are common
phenomenons
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomena
in a
celebrity
’s
life
.
On the other hand
, problems are problems, and without problems,
life
would be meaningless, everyone has them in his or her
life
. No one gets to become a
celebrity
in a blink of an eye, it requires time, passion and sacrifices. Being a
celebrity
is not an easy task to perform, but
that is
what makes them different and unique from the rest of the people,
that is
why they get followed. Being a
celebrity
gives a person more opportunities, a chance to bring change and to be heard, to influence the behaviours of others and to have a powerful voice which itself is unique because not every person has
such
kind of a luxury.
Last
but not least, everything comes with a price, and being a
celebrity
is no exception. In my opinion, I would choose to be a
celebrity
instead
of being a common person. It is much better to be followed than following others.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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