Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discussed the views and give your opinion.

Plants and a
nimals
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animal
species
have vital role in ecosystems. We humans cannot survive without
plant
and animal because they have maintained a balance in our planet Earth.Due to human selfishness many plants and animals are sacrificed. Some a
grues
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argue
argues
have argued
that plants and animals can be still protected now while others contend with the assertion.
a
lthough
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Although
i
ts
it is
it's
late
,i
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,
n my view still we can change the scenario by protecting
plant
and animal
species
. To start with, human has always done activities to protect themselves without analysing the fact that
plant
and animal are
also
part of out planet. Human activities always had a greater c
onsequences
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consequence
on
plant
and animal
species
.But now,
w
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,
e are aware about it so it should be preserved rather than destroyed. We should focus on preserving them by creating awareness,
n
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,
ot destroying forests,
n
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,
ot always focusing on human satisfaction. Plants always has given so much o
f
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in
f
avor
promote over another
favour
to h
umans
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humans, such
such
as from air to fruits,
m
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,
edicines,
h
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,
erbs,
e
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,
ven its r
oots brances
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roots, branches
roots branches
to make products for human purpose but now its time to save them. We have t
o
being one more than one
two
garden them. Global warming has reached its p
oint so
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point, so
we human are now competing with
n
ature if
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nature, if
we try to protect them
.h
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.
umans
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Humans
have already destroyed the
nature
in w
ay possible manner
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a way possible manner
the way possible manner
so
nature
with n
uture
the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized
nature
nurture
itself. Humans should not try to interfere with
nature
otherwise
the consequences like v
alcano
a fissure in the earth's crust (or in the surface of some other planet) through which molten lava and gases erupt
volcano
earthquake might occur. To sum up i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am w
ith
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to
the point that now humans should try to solve the problem by taking e
ffevtive
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
measures
such
as awareness to protect endangered
Plant
and a
nimals
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animal
species
and give them full support as we g
ive support our
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give support to our
kids. With all the above reasons mentioned humans should t
ry try
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try, try
to n
uture
help develop, help grow
nurture
neuter
nature
's things.

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