some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. which one do you think is more effective?

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types

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of benefits are

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study

firstly

, some institutes

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organise

events of

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to gather

studies. So that, the students are enhancing their inner abilities and become more extrovert in their life.

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their

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importance

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the group

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the students are making more friends and the bonding is between them become a strong.

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study

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so they easy to separate their work and quickly finish their project in short time so it is a benefit of

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some plus point of individual

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of all, if the

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does

the alone work

then

they do

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better

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their

study

and get more marks.

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study

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the student's mind

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on students mine and their hard work. Some

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boring, then

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gotten

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a good score

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