Some people believe governments should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is a better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some would argue that constructing lines of trains and subways could cut down the
traffic
, while others believe that
this
can be curbed with wider and more roads.
building the
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Building, the
Building the
former alternatives would bring down the
traffic
dramatically but
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dramatically, but
the latter idea could be useful
at
Suggestion
in
places where trains and subways are not possible to build. I desperately feel that having broad roads could only resolve the
traffic
issue to a certain point but, if it is combined along with trains and tubes or other alternatives there won't be any future congestions in
traffic
.
To begin
with, with the advent of vehicles like cars and two-wheelers every person now has a bike or a car and commutes to work or anywhere through own vehicles which are causing the congestion on roads every day and it is increasing rapidly.
Moreover
, narrow roads making it difficult to cross
through leading
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through, leading
to one big jam.
Third
world countries are great examples of
this
problem. Indian cities
such
as Mumbai and Delhi are the major places where transport is
difficult
Suggestion
more difficult
than everywhere else.
Although
,
metro
trains are available in these
cities
Suggestion
city
city's
traffic
is unchanged due to poor roads and routes. Attention should be kept turned to these issues. Broader roads could solve these predicaments despite the fact that there are uncontrollable vehicles. Allowing people to understand the importance of using public transport could bring down these problems.
For example
, In Hyderabad, a city in India faced a terrible reduction in
traffic
after introducing
metro
for more than 100
kilometers
a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
which is noteworthy even though it had broad roads when compared to other places it is the
metro
which tackled the issue.
Thus
, having both
metro
lanes and wider routes is the best solution for treating
traffic
In conclusion, each facility has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own limitations
such
as route or
availability but
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availability, but
if combined with connecting lanes and shuttling services that could connect vehicle commuters with these lanes could be a great idea to solve
traffic
congestions.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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