Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Although

some people subscribe to the belief that

career

progression is of paramount importance

to

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in

the people`s life, there

are

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is

some voices concern about the potential adverse effects of poor communication with families and friends which I will discuss in

this

essay. Admittedly, there are several reasons why some people tend to spend more time to progress up the

career

ladder.

Firstly

,

career

achievement is of great benefit to successfully

development

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develop

developed

in the form of financial matters.

This

may mean that thriving in a job opportunity might give rise to better social and personal welfare, hopefully leading to an improvement in quality of life. The proof of

this

might be that poverty can afflict families in various forms, from the level of subsistence to the education and marriage.

Secondly

, pursuing a

career

has rewards which go beyond the material considerations. It seems quite tenable that job satisfaction may afford spiritual enrichment,

thus

fostering the sense of self-confidence and self-assurance. With regards to the above argument, placing more emphasis on the effective communication with families and friends is a key illustration of rational thinking. It seems quite justifiable that

such

a communication is essential for absorbing ground rules and codes of

conducts

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conduct

for social

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and development of family structure, arguably leading to an absence of emotional and social problems, particularly for younger members of

family

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the family

. Nobody can deny the tremendous benefits of continuous supervision of parents for their children, ensuring

well-behaved environment

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a well-behaved environment

which might be provided for children to be well-brought up. Equally, most people would derive benefits from their families and friends in terms of

career

progression and financial matters. All

thing

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things

considered, one can conclude that both sides of

debate

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the debate

are not necessarily mutually exclusive. From my point of view, sensible figures would share fairly their time with both surrounding people and

career

advancement.