As computers are being used more and move in education. There will soon be no role for the teacher in classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that computers have become one of the most important tools utilized by teachers and students in education. Personally, I still cannot agree the idea that computers could replace teachers completely in
short period
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a short period
although
they are significantly useful. There are several merits of using computers in education.
Firstly
, thank for the using of
computer
,
study become
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study, become
more efficiency
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more efficient
and connivance. Comparing with traditional learning materials, application software installed
in
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on
the computers,
such
as Word and Excel,
have dramatically shorten
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have dramatically shortened
the time on writing an essay or analyse a statistic report. Editing these papers now is so easy that the tasks could be done by clicking a mouth to change pictures or retyping some texts. Meanwhile, students now are free from the
bandage
the state of being under the control of a force or influence or abstract power
bondage
of geography. They can acquire the knowledge they need from the teacher over
thousands kilometres
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a thousand kilometres
thousand kilometres
away and enjoy the class by just
seat
be seated
sit
in front of the
computer
screen.
Secondly
,
study
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the study
studies
by
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of
computers is more environmental friendly e-books stored in
computer
have been adapt
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have been adapted
and adopt to replace paper-based reading materials.
Finally
, self-learning is becoming much easier because the mass amount of e-learning material could be accessed by students themselves by computers.
However
,
although
computers make some great contributions
on
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in
to
education, it does not mean that teachers can be replaced by computers. Teachers still have some non-replaceable benefits to students.
First
of all, teachers can not only impart knowledge but
also
take care of
students
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students'
student
psychology
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psychological
health as well.
Furthermore
, teachers
also
can point out the drawbacks of students and customize the study plan depend on the
students
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students'
personalities and intelligence.
Last
but no least,
teachers professional
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teachers, professional
behaviours would be a good example for students to follow and imitate to help them to build up positive personalities and the value of ethic. In conclusion, despite the advantages of computers, it seems to me that it is impossible for
computer
to achieve the task of replacing teachers in the classroom in
the shorter
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the shortest
. It still is a good assistant for teachers.

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