The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied line graph describes the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
students
graduated
from Canadian universities commencing from 1992 to 2007. Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
Overall
, the female gradutes
supersede the number of male graduates. Correct your spelling
graduates
Furthermore
, female and male students
have an upward trend in the given time frame.
As provided in the graph, over the period of 1992 to 2000, the number of male and female students
experienced a minor fluctuation. In
Change preposition
From
Change the article
the year
year
1992 to 1995, a slight increase in Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
Correct article usage
the number
occured
of approximately over 10000 for Correct your spelling
occurred
female
and over 5000 Fix the agreement mistake
females
for
male Change preposition
apply
students
. In figures, females originally almost 100000 became 110000 and male graduates roses from 70000 to 75000. Before the year 1996, the digits declined on a small scale and had some fluctuations on
the Change preposition
in
next
four years. In 2001, the statistics started to rose again by 50000 for females and 25000 for males in reference to the figure in the year 1992.Submitted by manilyn061987 on
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