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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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It is generally said that humans are always striving to enrich their
learnings
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learning
 through exploring new places. It may be the reason that more people tend to visit remote places where living conditions are harsh with difficult accessibility. There are advantages and disadvantages in
this
 approach. Exploration of these places equips humans with realities and true meaning of their lives. One may learn his own capabilities and limitations. They may
also
 satisfy their self-actualization needs and get to know themselves. Siberia is
such
 example, where despite of difficult
situations people
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situations, people
tends
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tend
 to visit and upon returning, they contribute more positively to their own communities. When
large number
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a large number
 of people come to these places, it is
also
 good for their local economy. Many businesses grow with
influx
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the influx
 of tourism industry and it brings positive impact
of
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on
lives
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the lives
 of
residence
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residents
.
For example
, there are now many tour operator companies are going to launch their business in Sahara Desserts and many new jobs are created in
area
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the area
areas
. Some disadvantages are
also
 associated with
this
, if more people are visiting these places than it becomes difficult for
Government
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the Government
 to ensure their safety. As these
area
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areas
lacks
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lack
 basic
infrastructure
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infrastructure, hence
hence
 more lives are put in danger. Most people are not fully experienced to survive in these brutal conditions and they add more burden on local services.
Secondly
, most visitors don’t take care of local customs and annoy local communities. To conclude, we may say that when tourists visit to isolated lands, it improvises themselves and brings positive changes of
local community
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the local community
local communities
. But at the same it brings challenges for
local community
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local communities
the local community
.
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