Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Changing jobs
happens
quite often to young employees recently which they tend to Suggestion
happen
looking
for a better Suggestion
look
be looking
job
and an environment to develop their Use synonyms
career
. In my opinion, there are many advantages of shifting at some points in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
career
where youths can get a good offer with Suggestion
a career
higher paid salary
as well as Suggestion
a higher paid salary
promissing
showing possibility of achievement or excellence
promising
processing
position
in Use synonyms
new
Suggestion
the new company
a new company
company
.
For the youths who have just graduated and starting their Use synonyms
career
, lacking experience in professional paths could cause no fully understand Use synonyms
requirement
or environment in the Suggestion
the requirement
company
they applied to. Use synonyms
Therefore
, after starting the Linking Words
job
for Use synonyms
short period
, they realise that they are not able to adapt to Suggestion
a short period
job
Use synonyms
requirement
Accept comma addition
requirement, for
for example
a long twelve Linking Words
hours
shift in Suggestion
hour
factory
that may not be suitable to an engineer who prefers a Suggestion
a factory
factories
the factory
job
in Use synonyms
office
as a while collar. Low paid Suggestion
an office
also
is Linking Words
a
issue when they tried to propose the lowest salary as possible in order to be recruited easily.
Suggestion
an
Benefits
of changing Suggestion
The benefits
job
frequently to the youths that it can bring a better offer which propose a higher income and Use synonyms
promissing
showing possibility of achievement or excellence
promising
position
in Use synonyms
corparate ladder
. These are one of the most Suggestion
the corporate ladder
corporate ladder
criterias
that affect youths' a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
decison
to leave the the act of making up your mind about something
decision
company
to Use synonyms
pursuit
other opportunities outside. Except some cases, young candidates could not refuse a proposal at Suggestion
pursue
new
Suggestion
the new company
a new company
company
with a double salary or a management level. Those are because most of the youths need Use synonyms
high
income for their living expense or invest in Suggestion
higher
graduated
education; a manager level Suggestion
graduate
also
helps them define a solid and Linking Words
acknowlegded
recognized or made known or admitted
acknowledged
position
whenever they want to move to Use synonyms
new
Suggestion
the new company
a new company
company
.
In conclusion, young employees change their Use synonyms
job
frequently in order to develop their Use synonyms
career
. These bring lots of benefits by getting a better Use synonyms
position
and income in new Use synonyms
company
Use synonyms
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