More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. What is your opinion?
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advanced field
of careers Suggestion
advanced fields
the advanced field
such
as engineering, information technology and healthcare are relocating from underdevelopment to Linking Words
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development
countries. While some people consider that Suggestion
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development
countries are trying to again the human Suggestion
developing
resourses
from underdevelopment countries, others look at it just same as a normal transition of labour demand all over the world. In my opinion, I totally agree with the available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
later
opinion that referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
this
movement happens naturally everywhere.
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normally based in Accept comma addition
headquarters, which
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development
countries in order to develop all their abilities and move up in Suggestion
developing
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corporate ladder
. Suggestion
the corporate ladder
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countries
around the world, some functions e.Suggestion
country
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development
, are seldom established in poor Use synonyms
countrie
even still some jobs in the field of sales and marketing, anyway those may not fit with their qualification and educational background. a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
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in California Suggestion
are based
therefore
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this
field, he would need to relocate to there.
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also
helps talent people earn a salary that they could never Linking Words
been
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be
dream
in their poor country. In the Suggestion
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development
countries, there always has a regulated Suggestion
developed
developing
minimun
wage the workers can earn, and the amount could be higher four or five times than in their homeland. There will be no any circumstance which employers try to pay them as less as they can. An Indian surgeon who is working in San Jose the least possible
minimum
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could be paid approximately $250,000 per year. If he works in Mumbai, he might gain only 20 percent of that amount.
In conclusion, job relocations from underdevelopment to Suggestion
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development
countries are Suggestion
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happened
naturally by the demand Suggestion
happening
of
skilled workers. Almost the talents are looking for a better position in the corporate ladder or a better working Suggestion
for
invironment
where they can show off all their capabilities the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
besides
getting the best compensation. Those just can be fulfilled in the Linking Words
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development
country.Suggestion
developing
developed
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