Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or example

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It is said that people should work for
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company
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for whole life whilst others believe that they should change their
job
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frequently to work
in
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with
different companies. I think both approaches have benefits and drawbacks, and I will outline in
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essay. On the
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hand, the employees who have been working for
long time
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a long time
in
one
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company
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will be justified for promotion in corporate ladder
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because they are the employees with the most experience and talent.
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, companies always tend to value loyalty as the utmost importance criteria in their culture and business.
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, they usually reward loyal workers for their contribution
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as long service award after 5, 10 or 15 years working in my current
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as an example.
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, companies are
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eager to keep these talents as
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they're
invaluable assets from being brain-drain of peers which means
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secured.
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, a boring working environment and repeated procedure daily would be an issue for workers to concern.
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, working in different organizations gives a chance to workers to discover or gain a suitable workplace, colleagues or team. It is
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especially suitable
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for
fresh graduate people who really want to look for a decent
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after some trying with various employers. Anyway, there may be a drawback that management board will not consider
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type of
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
for long term strategy. They might be put aside for any opportunity in career
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as professional training or personal level adjustment because
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company
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the company
a company
don’t want
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doesn’t want
to waste for any human resources’ investment to staffs who just want to change their
job
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often. In conclusion, working with
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company
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for life time or shifting
career
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careers
to various companies all have advantages and disadvantages. These depend on
current status
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the current status
that
employee
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employees
the employee
an employee
can make up their mind to stay with
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company
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the company
a company
or
pursuit
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pursue
other opportunities outside. In my opinion, I always look for stable
job
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such
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I prefer to work for
one
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company
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if it is available.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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