food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. however ,some of the method used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities to what extent do you you agree or disagree?

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Food
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is one of the most important ingredients that give energy to human beings. Nowadays, foods can be easily produced and made cheap because of rectify fertilizers and
use
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of machines. But
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usage of some methods is becoming dangerous to people's health and the quality of it might be affected negatively on local society. The
advantage do
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advantage, do
not overweight of disadvantage.
Firstly
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the main affected part of the digesting system to using of machine
food
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because before of the era of technology, the people were made the feeds for their own hands so it was a very healthy and more suitable for everyone's body.
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, using of technical cousins is increasing the some kind of disease to dangerous for everyone.
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, sometime coincidentally
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packets brings very old an expire on date and it can be harmful for everybody.
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, there is some advantage of fertilizing feeds.
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of all, in the 21st century, using of technical fields are easily available everywhere and their
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also
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has become very easy.
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some instant foods are sold in the market and
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malls it can be very easy to cook and instantly and save
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the most time
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,
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of instant cuisines to saving our time and trouble free using for everyone like,
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the force of workers available
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easily cook the
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of machinery foods. To sum up, using of technology is
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becoming
very easy but
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it can be dangerous for health
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not only
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but
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every field.
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, using of foods
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very careful. I take my side on disadvantage of
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issues.
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