A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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People have been talking more and more about the usage of
land
in todays political and economical context. Some people believe that the
land
should be used for human needs, while others are worried about the
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
impact of
such
needs. I, for once, disagree that it's more
importante
of great significance or value
important
to use
land
for human needs
instead
of saving endangered animals. I say
this
because I believe that humans sometimes have an
overcapitalistic
state of mind.
In other words
, we put money ahead of a lot of things and reject the needs of other
species
.
For example
, the rates of
intended
lacking care and attention
untended
fires have significantly increased in the
last
five years in the Amazon Rainforest. These fires are usually caused by farmers who
deliberatlly
with intention; in an intentional manner
deliberately
set fire to the trees in order to have
an
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a
space where they can grow food or have animals.
This
means that, in
awhile
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a while
, we probably won'
t
have much more natural
land
there, what is a troublesome
fact since
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fact, since
this
rainforest is the home of a lot of
species
that exist only in
this
region of the world.
Besides
that, animals are part of a perfect balanced environment, which means that every
species
is needed in order to achieve
such
a thing.
Therefore
, if one type of animal is extinct, the entire habitat where it lives will be affected.
For instance
, when when
ants
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the ants
started being exterminated in the 70's due to the urbanization of Brazil, different
species
of animals
such
as anteaters almost went to extinction too because they didn'
t
have anything to eat. All in all, I believe that we should preserve the world's
land
in order to secure a safe place for human and animal life. Humans won'
t
be able to survive
alone so
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alone, so
I believe that the best option is to use our
land
to save endangered animals and look after other
species
that can'
t
actually speak but, contribute to earth's balance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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