The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate information about the
centre
named Islip located in the
small town and the future renovation plan. It can be clearly seen from the maps huge transformation will be occurred after redevelopment.
Correct article usage
a
According to
the
what is shown Correct article usage
apply
tow
new accommodations will be built, one in the same area Correct your spelling
two
of
the old houses just opposite Change preposition
as
to
the park and the other one on the north side of the Change preposition
apply
centre
. Car parking and bus
station will be available Correct article usage
a bus
after
this
huge renovation and they will be located beside the shopping centre
.
In addition
, the plan to surround the centre
with the main road, both school
and the shopping Correct article usage
the school
centre
remained the same except the shopping mall moved a little bit to the left side while
the park
area becomes smaller than before.
Change the verb form
parking
To sum up
, we could say that the centre
in the future will be more attractive and easy to access it
by the people.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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