The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate information about the
centre
named Islip located in Use synonyms
the
small town and the future renovation plan. It can be clearly seen from the maps huge transformation will be occurred after redevelopment.
Correct article usage
a
According to
Linking Words
the
what is shown Correct article usage
apply
tow
new accommodations will be built, one in the same area Correct your spelling
two
of
the old houses just opposite Change preposition
as
to
the park and the other one on the north side of the Change preposition
apply
centre
. Car parking and Use synonyms
bus
station will be available Correct article usage
a bus
after
Linking Words
this
huge renovation and they will be located beside the shopping Linking Words
centre
.
Use synonyms
In addition
, the plan to surround the Linking Words
centre
with the main road, both Use synonyms
school
and the shopping Correct article usage
the school
centre
remained the same except the shopping mall moved a little bit to the left side Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
park
area becomes smaller than before.
Change the verb form
parking
To sum up
, we could say that the Linking Words
centre
in the future will be more attractive and easy to access Use synonyms
it
by the people.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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