Some say that young and energetic employees are the more valuable for the company, others argue that older employees have more experience and knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples, based on you own experience.

In business, the
diffrence
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
between a winner company and a loser one is the
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an actor's line that immediately precedes and serves as a reminder for some action or speech
cue
cow
crew
, your people matters, let’s see if
its
it is
it's
better to have a young team or an
older
Suggestion
old
experienced one. Hire brand new forces for your company could be a key
fo
in the direction of
to
success, they have a good
motivation mood
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motivation, mood
, and the
are
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
close to the youngest
generatuons
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generations
generation
, so if you sell any
prodoucts
commodities offered for sale
products
product
or services, they could give you a plus in order to
uderstand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
the market and eventually to crush it with your “
next
big thing”. The only thing in
wihch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
they are poor is
experience
Suggestion
experiencing
, that you can find in aged employees, your older team can
also
put a family environment in your
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
. As far as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
concerned i
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concerned, I
concerned I
’ve always
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
bilanced
being in a state of proper equilibrium
balanced
groups of people in my working team, as an
entrapenour
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
or as an employee in my life experience
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
took something important from both
kind
Suggestion
kinds
of groups. From the new arrived, of course, a fresh point of view,
wihch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
could solve problems that the experience couldn’t. From the old employees
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
’ve alwey took
Suggestion
’ve always taken
’ve always took
accountability and solidity that are fundamental aspects
for
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of
a
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
business. Choosing one between the two groups for your company policy is realy hard, just becouse you need both of them, and creating the perfect mixture you’ll keep your business always on the market

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