Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

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Art
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is
crucial part
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a crucial part
of cultural heritage across the globe.
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,
as a result
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of modernization less people are interested in
art
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and their priorities
are concentrated
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concentrate
on science, medicine, technology and other practical subjects. The two primary
reason
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reasons
for
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concept and measures to tackle
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issue will be illustrated in the following paragraphs before a conclusion is drawn. It is quite clear that
art
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itself is not
source
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a source
of livelihood
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,
can not provide stable
income
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and even artists are not backed by government.
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, most of
artists
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the artists
have been living on the edge since they are struggling to support themselves and their own family. All these
tension
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tensions
and not having
stree
a thoroughfare (usually including sidewalks) that is lined with buildings
street
-free life can cause lots of mental disorders for artists which lead them to give up on their dream in the middle path.
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, there are some artists who have been performing and entertaining people for over 10 years, but they are not renowned and living in poor condition.
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, to deal with
this
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finanancial
involving financial matters
financial
problem and making a living
,
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,
they are forced to have more than one career.
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, studying practical subjects
such
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as medicine
,
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,
technology and others help young people to have a prospect future since these subjects contribute to have advanced world and lots of people will be provided with a comfortable life through these subjects. It is worth pointing out that the authorities have never given liberty to artists in order to criticise the social and political issues freely which result in the increase of
scare
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the scare
of
consequences
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the consequences
they have to face.
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, it is estimated
that most of political
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that most political
prisoners are artists who made an effort to depict and refine some of the community issues through
art
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. The
first
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cause can be deal by providing financial support for artists who have low
income
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by
government
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the government
. Government can construct lots of
art
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galleries and organize cultural events to generate
array
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an array
of job opportunities and even more tourists from all over the world can be attracted to increase the
income
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of artists. The
second
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solution is about giving full freedom
to
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for
artists to express their
thought
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thoughts
and feelings without being afraid of anything.
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,
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,
more people will be attracted to
art
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and
this
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culminate in
culture
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cultural
enrichment. To conclude, not having a secure future and
income
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,
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,
make
art
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the dispensable part of life
.
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.
To tackle
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challenge
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,
the support from
governmet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is vital
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Economic growth
  • STEM subjects
  • Job security
  • Financial success
  • Pragmatic
  • Utilitarian pursuits
  • Art education
  • Inclusive
  • Engaging
  • Contemporary society
  • Social issues
  • Environmental themes
  • Digital platforms
  • Virtual museums
  • Interactive art
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