You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

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Walker Here is Asma, a current student of Business administration at Loren Brusque University. I'm writing a letter because of the Announcement I've seen early

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morning on The University's Notice Bored, after having seen your advertisement about The Quality Assurance Manager, I would like to apply for it. I will finish my Master year of

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semester, only after submitting a graduation project. The

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reason why I'm confident about my abilities to do just great in the job is

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, as well as my study and Marks are successful, I've been

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doing a part-time job, where I teach some of the new students who share the same major as me, which helped me to get a clear Background of

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of works, having enough Experience with managing many different factors at the same time. Having a good Leadership, social and Honest Persona added points to me, which I Believe fits The Vacancy pretty well.

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, I would deeply appreciate it if you choose me for

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great job, I can't wait to hear from you and attend the Interview, Please contact me if you need any more information, Thank you. WhatsApp: 0555555555

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

199 words

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