Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.

Teenager is the most important age because they have no experience enough to be an adult. It is easiest to influence them in the worst situations. There are two views

of

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these topics, some people believe that family is the most significant for younger generations, but some disagree, they believe that

friends

are the most necessary. So, I strongly agree

that

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the first

views

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. Since every child

born

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, the family is the early unit that

children

can perceive. In the normal way, the first person that baby knows

was

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their

parents

.

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,

children

always

spent

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time at home in their first ages. The people who believe that, in a good family, when

children

have got a problem, they usually tell their

parents

. The main reason is their

parents

always

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their

children

and give some

advices

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and

best

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recommendation

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to

children

.

Although

they grow up,

parents

still

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the best

counsellor

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for them.

Nevertheless

, some people argue that when

children

grow up in teenager

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, their environment will be totally changed. They spent most of their life in school.

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, they always ask their

friends

more than their

parents

.

For example

, if teenagers have

friends

who love to study, they always study together. Some young adults think that their

parents

have an ineffective answer than their

friends

who

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their

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same age. In conclusion, there are many factors to influence

juvenile

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, family and

friends

.

However

, the love of family is the best

ways

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to affect them. In my view,

friends

have more power only

short

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times, but family always impacts them all their life.