In the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences from their home country. Nowadays, the sceneries in places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarities? Do you think the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?

Traveling

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Travelling

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abroad gives people opportunities to explore more about the

world

,

however

, the differences between all corners of the

world

are getting smaller

due to

many reasons. I personally think that the detrimental effects of

this

trend outweigh its benefits.

Firstly

I will analyze the causes of these similarities. The first point to note is the resemblances in architecture, which is mainly caused by the assimilation for a very long time.

For instance

, Vietnam, a country in

South East

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Asia, used to be a colony of China, France, and America for thousands of years.

This

has resulted in the existence of many French-styled buildings

as well as

those with Chinese style.

Additionally

,

globalization

has led to people’s imitation of lifestyles. Nowadays, the American lifestyle is very popular among young people. They try to catch up with

American’s

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makeup styles, trendy clothes, and their life habits.

Moreover

, integration can

also

be considered as the cause of the appearance of skyscrapers, café shops, and restaurants, which are similar views that we can find in downtown areas in all big cities around the

world

. To demonstrate, KFC and McDonald’s chains can be seen in most parts of the

world

. It can be clearly seen that

this

trend is accompanied

with

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many negative aspects. First of all, every nation has

their

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its

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own cultural

identities

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identity

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, which is our ancestor’s most treasurable heritage. Cultural

globalization

will gradually destroy the cultural diversity of each country.

Also

,

this

trend will

also

make global tourism pointless and boring since all places are becoming the same,

tourists

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will be no longer interested in visiting other countries. Another point to note is the damage that

globalization

has done to the environment. To integrate, each country has to develop,

industrialize

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and industrialize

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to compete with others.

This

economic competition will

consequently

lead to environmental pollution because of the building of factories and high-rise buildings.

Moreover

, in the process of

globalization

, we produce a large number of advanced technologies, which are mostly imported from abroad.

This

will likely

to

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make people rely on foreign technology and not put

efforts

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in

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into

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learning and researching. In conclusion, the increase of similarities globally is caused by many factors and in my opinion, it brings more cons than pros.