Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to Science and Technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Knowledge is an ultimate power, people
has
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have
it in different forms
such
as
science
and
technology
, art
,
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,
sports
excetra
more than is needed, desired, or required
extra
.
University
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The university
has
diffent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
streams which
offers
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offer
all
kind
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kinds
of subjects for the
students
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students, however
however
some people believe they should only be allowed to study
tehnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
or
science
subjects and others deny it. We will discuss the various aspects of both the views in following paragraphs. One should have complete freedom to choose the subjects of his choice based on the
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
,
hence
,
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,
in my opinion, there should not be any compulsion by the authorities to enforce any
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
subject. It is not true that only
technology
or
science
is important. Some people might not be
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
in
such
subjects, at the same time, they might
proove
be shown or be found to be
prove
proven
proved
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
as a very good artist, so we can't decide that
some one
a human being
someone
has
career
growth only in
perticular subject
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particular subjects
particular subject
a particular subject
particulars subject
the particular subject
. A good sports person has
lot
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lots
of opportunities for his
career
growth rather than building a
career
as a technician. Rather than making
technology
and
science
subjects
mandetory
required by rule
mandatory
,
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,
universities should provide the options to students for picking up a course from each stream. In
this
way
student
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students
the student
will know their own
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
interested
and they can build their
career
in it. In summery
,
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,
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
science
and
technology
is
good but
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good, but
other subjects are
also
equally important. So in my opinion there should not be any compulsion by universities for any
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
subject.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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