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Children of ages 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, family and society? What are the possible solutions to this situation

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Now a day, the youngster spending majority of their time in isolation, either watching television or challenging each other in video games.
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 limited activities have devastating impacts on their physical and mental abilities. There is no one specific solution to
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 problem but, rather it requires a series of actions which bring balance in
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. Sedative lifestyle, not only limits their social upbringing, but
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 have negative effects on health, as it limits their indulgence in sports and exercises which are necessary for the people of
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 particular age group in order to develop their brain tissues and muscles. Active
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 style brings more clarity in their thought process, they tend to know what they have to do or achieve in the future and possess much wider network which will help them later on in their careers.
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,
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 people are not only the cause of distress for their parents as they have created some expectations
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 resultant as a burden on a country’s economy. One must need to adopt a balance lifestyle in order to encounter
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 need to spend more time with their kids doing various home base activities, participating with them in different summer camps whenever they have time and take them out on regular intervals to introduce them to other children’s so they observe and learn from them
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 it will change their environment and introduce them to the nature which will be beneficial for them. In conclusion, it is essential to restrict usage of television and video games to bring discipline in their children’s
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 and prosper them in their
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 in an efficient manner.

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