You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter -say what the participants liked about the hotel -explain why they were unhappy about the food -Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with a meeting which was organized in your
hotel
on the 1st November for the employees of the “Avanta” company. According to the feedback given by the guests they though roughly enjoyed hotel
facilities, particularly the outstanding design of the building and furnishing, as well as the quality of reception and transfer provided.
However
, in spite of the overall contentment with hotel
amenities
the participants of the meeting reported being dissatisfied with the quality of food served for lunch. All colleagues agreed on the fact that the food was stale, especially bread and some of the salads, and the meat was tough and undercooked. One of the guests complained about having abdominal discomfort after Add a comma
,amenities
the
lunch. Though not leading to any serious problems.
Taking into consideration the abovesaid, we would appreciate it if you establish Correct article usage
apply
a
better control over the kitchen and the cooking process. Considering all Remove the article
apply
favorable
reports that were heard about the Change the spelling
favourable
hotel
so far, we are not going to leave any negative feedback officially. We hope that this
was simply a misfortunate accident and the fame of your hotel
will not suffer from it.
Faithfully yours,Submitted by bueenee on
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