Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I'm writing
this
letter to let you know that I have
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heard
heared
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about the award your newspaper offers. There is
somone
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someone
I would like to suggest, it is Jhon. surely, he won't
dissapoint
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disappoint
you . Let me explain why I extremely suggest him for the award. As we all know, our job required someone with great leadership and
sincere
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persona. Jhon, as we all know do a lot of charity and
proffisinal
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professional
at his work. which I myself really proud to have someone like him in our team . Would you kindly
consedering
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considering
my suggestion? I
Also
Think a week-long vacation would be
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good award. what will charge him to make
a more good results
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a more good result
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on return and
also
, make others in the team trying their best to
acheive
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great work results passionately . Thank you for considering my humble suggestion. I really appreciate it . your faithfully, Asma
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