Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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letter to let you know that I have
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heared
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about the award your newspaper offers. There is
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someone

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I would like to suggest, it is Jhon. surely, he won't
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you . Let me explain why I extremely suggest him for the award. As we all know, our job required someone with great leadership and
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persona. Jhon, as we all know do a lot of charity and
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at his work. which I myself really proud to have someone like him in our team . Would you kindly
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my suggestion? I
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Think a week-long vacation would be
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good award. what will charge him to make
a more good results
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a more good result
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, make others in the team trying their best to
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great work results passionately . Thank you for considering my humble suggestion. I really appreciate it . your faithfully, Asma

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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