the chart below shows the proportion of british students at one university in england

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the percentage of British students of a particular University who spoke other foreign

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apart from English. The information about the

languages

spoken

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for the years 2000 to 2010 respectively.

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, the number of university students who

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English, French, Spanish

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and

two other

languages

had a noticeable change

while

German had

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same percentage of students over a period of time. On the one hand, the highest percentage of speakers was Spanish in 2000 but it had a decrease in 2010 by 10%. And French had witnessed a

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decrease

of 5%

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from 2000 to 2010.

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of

German

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the German

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language was 10% which

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not changed over a period of a decade.

On the other hand

, English speakers increased from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010.

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another language and two other

languages

observed an upward trend of 5% from 2000 to 2010.