Leaders have the authority to make decisions, what do you think about that?

Leaders have the authority to make decisions. Some people believe that leaders who admit their wrong
decision
are the regarded as the best, while some believe that they are not. In my own opinion, I believe that leaders that
admits
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admit
their wrong
decision
are the best. I feel
this
way for a few reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First
of all, when people in power accept their wrong
decision
they are regarded as the best because they are seen as
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being
humble. It is always difficult for those in authority to admit their faults, and ones they do, people regard them as the best.
For example
, I remember ten years ago when I was the president of our school student union government. There was an opening for students sports head. I had a close friend that wanted the
position
, even though she
wasn’t qualify
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did not qualify
didn’t qualify
wasn’t qualified
was not qualified
for that
position
and they had better opponents than her. I used my
position
to give her the job. When she resumed, she wasn’t taking the job seriously and had no plan for the
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
games students were preparing for. She never bothered to get the right coach or either motivate students to go for practice.
As a result
, our school lost all their games and our school rankings dropped from
be
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being
the 1st in all universities games to 56th
position
. All our students were angry with me, I had to take the responsibilities and accepted my awful
decision
. After that apology, students saw me as
been
the state or fact of existing
being
humbled and regarded as the best
students
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student
students'
president.
In addition
, when presidents accept their faulty choice they are regarded as the best because they considered the
feels
give a tip or gratuity to in return for a service, beyond the compensation agreed on
fees
falls
falls falls
fells
of others.
As a result
, they gain more loyalty and could be voted back to power if they
recontest
again.
For example
, my friend James was the head of their accounting firm, she has
this
habit of not consulting with her followers before taking most vital choices. There was one
ooccasion
an event that occurs at a critical time
occasion
that she approved that a vendor should supply stationeries for their department
,
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,
she did
this
without vetting the supplier. When the vendor supplied the stationeries, they were
sub standard
falling short of some prescribed norm
substandard
. It was difficult to print with the papers and the inks were
over flowing
covered with water
overflowing
. Her works were furious about it because it made work difficulty for them. She noticed it
,
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,
and apologized about her bad choice. Her followers were pleased with her because she considered their feelings. In conclusion, I firmly believe that leaders are seen as the best when they admit their wrong
decision
.
This
is because they are seen as humble and
this
is because they consider others feelings.

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