History is not impotant as it less infor mation .so we shoukd not learn history . Do you agree and disagree

It is
undauteadily
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
tru
consistent with fact or reality; not false
true
that
history
is
backbone
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the backbone
for every
country but
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country, but
nowadays masses do not take
interest
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an interest
in
history
.
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.
As they have
conected
being joined in close association
connected
consulted
conducted
with
tecnical era so
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the technical era, so
the technical era so
technical era so
that
,
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,
is why they do not like
history
.
Altough
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Although
history
is boring
,
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,
we can gain
infomatin
a message received and understood
information
about many things which
realted
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
to
past
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the past
. Though there are numerous factors that one can go on to enlist put my one of the most important view is that
history
has store of knowledge. About our past like as, traditions
,
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,
customs
,
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,
life
and so on. For increasing our experience about
life
.
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For
excample
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
,
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,
there were multiple incident
happend
come to pass
happened
in
yester
years
.
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.
In which few
has made
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have made
remarkable sign
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a remarkable sign
remarkable signs
in the whole world
.
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.
Through the
life
of these people we would explore our
knoweldge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
.
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.
What kind of houses and clothes were being used by
theme
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the theme
.
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.
Clearly
,
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,
we can
campare
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compare
their
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
with those masses and
also
rember
recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection
remember
the tradition which were
been
the state or fact of existing
being
celebreadted
widely known and esteemed
celebrated
by people
.
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.
Moreover
, people may motivate
form
a giver or sender
from
past
activites
any specific behavior
activities
.
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.
Because there were many activities
,
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,
which were
worng
affected by wear; damaged by long use
worn
wrong
and right for the people.
In
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From
past which
mistcakes
a wrong action attributable to bad judgment or ignorance or inattention
mistakes
has done
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have been done
by people
,
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,
we must learn from these
mistskes
a wrong action attributable to bad judgment or ignorance or inattention
mistakes
.
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.
As past
always repeat
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always repeats
again
.
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.
To read
history is
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history, is
also
suitable for learners if they want to achieve success in
thier
of them or themselves
their
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
future
.
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.
For instance
, we can
history
books in which there were many people getting success even, they had
problem
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a problem
problems
in
life
.
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Eventhough
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Even though
learning
history
could be
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
, but
stiil
with reference to action or condition; without change, interruption, or cessation
still
it is
wastage
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a waste
waste
of time for many people
.
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.
Past is past it is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
thought
by
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of
them. And
also
all things
of
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about
it
unuseless
.
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.
Conclusively,
history
not only
knowledgeful
but
also
entertaning
agreeably diverting
entertaining
entertain
.
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.
But
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
are unable to understand
,
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,
because they have keen
oter
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
either
outer
side
.
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.
It is
responsibility
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the responsibility
a responsibility
of government to take some steps for tackling
such
situation
.
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.
If
massess
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the masses
masses
mussels
messes
do not read
history
,
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,
they would forget their culture had from yesteryears

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