Write about the following topic. There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Presently, there are many countries in the
world allowing
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world, allowing
immigration including
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immigration, including
Canada, USA, Germany etc. There are many reasons why people are
beind
forbidden by law
banned
allowed to move to different countries like Economic growth, population growth etc. The main question is to what extend
immigration
need to be allowed. One of the popular
answer
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answers
according to the survey conducted by MIT university is "it should not be more than 5% of the current population for
next 30 years
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the next 30 years
". But many people might have different opinions on
it expecially people
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it, especially people
it especially people
with low income
vages
a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing
wages
cages
and old people.
For instance
, if
a
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an
immigrant get a better paying
job
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job, then
then
people who are
employeed
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
will they job is taken by
different person
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different people
a different person
who just moved to
country
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the country
a country
.So,
governement
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the government
government
has to do a proper
sceintific
of or relating to the practice of science
scientific
study before taking decisions on
immigration
. One of the main
advantage
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advantages
of
immigration
is economic growth. Everyone come to a new country will work and pay taxes. The taxes will increase
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
budget.
For instance
, if the governement allow skilled labour to country especially in STEM

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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