The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Brick by brick the place of the Internet

rises

come into existence; take on form or shape

arises

in our lives. Some families have given up to watch TV an to listen to the radio due to web services,

such

as YouTube have replaced them. Far as I am concerned the traditional shops will be absolutely changed in the near future. From my perspective the recent burning growth of the online shopping is quite predictable, as Bill Gates said “If your business is not on the Internet,

then

your business will be out of business”. At the dawn of an online marketing. There are mostly reasons for that, but

first

of all a choice of some products is more comfortable in the online markets than in the offline ones.

For example

, only after reading in the Internet forums a lot of information and feedbacks of

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

users any gadget, I buy it. It is convenient for me when I can add to cart,

for example

, several models of a phone, pick up information about each ones and choice the best offer.

In addition

, using the web services which allow to compare the prices in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

shops help to save money. So buying across the World Network is not only convenient, but

also

profitable.

Moreover

, online shopping has given opportunities to get products

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from

sellers all over the world. So purchase scarce products have been significantly easier for people dwelling in a small town and unable to shop ones in the nearby malls.

On the other hand

, preferring online marketing people may buy a pig in a poke. Meantime, in the traditional

store you

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store, you

can try it on, feel the quality of new things and see your modern look before you pay money.

However

the most successful

marketing brand

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marketing, brand

offer to put on clothes buying through the Internet and return it when you get your order for free. In conclusion, I think that we will observe

rocketing rate

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the rocketing rate

of the online trading and in several decades the traditional shops will belong to the past.

Sat Jan 25 2020

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree？

Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meet can cause health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?

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