Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rising edge

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The rising edge

of Universities can be said as better

development but

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development, but

apparently it is not when there are numbers of graduated unemployed going around it is a serious concern and

this

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essay intends to

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

all optimistic and

prilimistic

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nooks. Universities are the face of developed countries and gives student gratitude to face the world and to create his own

image but

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image, but

somehow situation is different today where people have stop trusting on the education because

maximum amount

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the maximum amount

of

syllabus

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the syllabus

is unimportant for companies and

that is

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the eventual goal of plethora of students to get

better job

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a better job

better jobs

in reward. It is

undenidable

not possible to deny

undeniable

that no industries will examine their knowledge about arts or history and everyone ask for practical knowledge to complete the work faster.

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Further more

in addition

Furthermore

, it is said that only to focus on individual subject is a negative side of education. To make students able to do almost everything is

responsibiltiy

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responsible

responsibility

of them and to connect them with art and history is no less than boon to them. Art is a benevolent practice to relax your

mind or

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mind, or

to enjoy your free time in banal situation, to understand different perception of nature and to increase their observing power it is good, Even to make them

respocible

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable

responsible

for

nation

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the nation

and to make them realize about ancient histories of their respective countries and to feel

pround

feeling self-respect or pleasure in something by which you measure your self-worth; or being a reason for pride

proud

of their

ancestores

someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)

ancestors

and their sacrifices it is very essential. People must understand that to make their life

fruitfull

productive or conducive to producing in abundance

fruitful

all these terms are imperative.

Study

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A study

just to earn money would be foolish step and all these prospects are good to construct better personality and

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all

are needed

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is needed

to become a true gentleman. To recapitulate, it is irrefutable that masses are practical these days and wasting time is not accepted

thus

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at one side selecting practical subjects to get opportunity is no

wrong but

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wrong, but

to make good impact being employee other subjects have paramount importance in daily life.