You should spend about 40 minutes on this task, Write about the following topic : People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Humans have been damaging the
environment
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ever since we realized our powers to harness nature. Global warming and air pollution are now frequent
headlinee
the heading or caption of a newspaper article
headlines
headline e
headline
on TV and in the
newapapers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
all
ove
from a particular thing or place or position
off
of
-the world, which keep reminding us of our
obligntion
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
obligation
to protect the
environment
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.
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, few actions are actually being taken at the individual level, and I think there are two major reasons why
poople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
are being so indifferent. The
first
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reasona
Suggestion
reason a
is that many people consider the environmental problems as a
fature
a citizen who has a legal right to vote
voter
concern. Environmental reports often warn us of the dire consequences of climate change or energy crisis 100 or 200 years later.
As a result
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, many people feel that money and time are
bettor
comparative of 'well'; in a better or more excellent manner or more advantageously or attractively or to a greater degree etc.
better
apent
depleted of energy, force, or strength
spent
on solving more immediate
problema
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
such
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as housing
shortnge
the property of being an amount by which something is less than expected or required
shortage
and traffic congestion than on preventing a disaster
that is
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only predicted to happen in the future.
Also
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, people feel that the environmental problems are too complex for individual people to cope with. Indeed, a combination of
factora
anything that contributes causally to a result
factors
causes environmental problems, many of which are
impoasible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
to be controlled through individual actions. The above attitudes are
understandable but
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understandable, but
are
obvioualy
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
mistaken, so the government needs to take proactive measures to make people
imore
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
ignore
envíronmentally responsible. They can make more public service advertisements to encourage people to consume
more green
Suggestion
greener
greenest
most green
products
instead
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of
diaposable
free or available for use or disposition
disposable
good are harmful to the
environment
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. They can
also
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offer more incentives to people who have been active in cleaning up the neighbourhood or
aeverely
to a severe or serious degree
severely
punish those who have been unfriendly to the
environment
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.

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