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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not manage correctly. Describe the merits and demerits of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks.

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Travel and
tourism
 has
crucial role
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a crucial role
 in
this
 day and age. There are numerous countries for huge rely on
tourism
 over the world. Somewhere
,
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,
it leads
country's
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the country's
 toward development as
a
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an
 income
source whereas
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source, whereas
,
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,
if
such
 sites are
undermanage
destroy property or hinder normal operations
undermining
 it create
alots
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a lot
a lots
 of obstacles.
This
 essay will discuss about the merits of having
tourism
 in a particular
places
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place
 along with some drawbacks. Social norms and values
reflects
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reflect
 the identity of a particular nation by
such
 religious areas.
To begin
 with, proper management of
tourists area
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the tourist area
tourist area
are
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is
 the positive sides for earning foreign currency and reflecting the culture.
For instance
, in context
to
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of
 Nepal, GDP and GNP which calculate annually, those most proportion to develop
country
 is from
income source
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an income source
 earn through travel and
tourism
 sites. One side, visitors visit only a famous
places
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place
 where all facilities want to
are
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be
 located. There are different fields which attract tourists and namely as
tourism
 sources like Adventures trip
,
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,
bunjee
an elasticized rope
bungee
 jumping
,
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,
paraglading
, UNESCO listed temples, famous mountains. If government focus on
such
 lines obviously a nation will rise up. Many facilities attract more visitors. Price of valuable arts, coins,
stones
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stone
 statue
are
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is
high whereas
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high, whereas
,
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,
it is more to
foreigner which
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foreigner, which
 basically says if they buy it helps to earn high. On the other side, foreigner only wants to visit where are interesting and facilitate things are found.
Similarly
,
unmanaged
 areas
,
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,
unconstruct
 buildings
,
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,
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
 facilitated and less valuable
goods makes them
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goods to make them
goods make them
 sad. Everyone
want
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wants
 to
spends
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spend
 their money on only attractive and valuable objects. If we only expect for foreign notes and less focus on repairing
such
 sites, our
country
 never goes on
develop
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developing
.
For instance
, Sagarmatha is not really go
for
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to
 a safe
place but
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place, but
 if it is well
manage
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managed
 only for seeing proper views, almost half of world travel to Nepal as sudden a single
country
 Nepal risen over a night. To recapitulate, earning and raising national income is not
easy way
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an easy way
. The proper and we'll management surely helps to reflect a
country
 over a world in a good path.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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