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In many countries , women are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of new born. do you think the advantages of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages?

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Undoubtedly
,
Accept space
,
maternity
 clothes leave is essential for
pragenant
carrying developing offspring within the body or being about to produce new life
pregnant
 women. In many nations females are permitted to take leave
.
Accept space
.
There are benefits and drawbacks to it
.
Accept space
.
 I believe that advantage supersede disadvantages. One significant
benefits
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benefit
 is that
maternity
leave
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leaves
 helpful for
children growth
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a child's growth
child's growth
the child's growth
children's growth
child growth
.
In other words
,
mother
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the mother
give
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gives
 full attention to
new
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the new
 born so that children
growth
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grow
 ameliorate.
For instance
, survey by Boston university reveals that 60% of new
bron
that part of the central nervous system that includes all the higher nervous centers; enclosed within the skull; continuous with the spinal cord
brain
brand
born
 development
depends
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depending
 on
mother
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the mother
.Another plus point of
maternity
 leave is that
new born
recently born
newborn
 children can learn their native languages which is not thought by any nursery While it
can not
can not
cannot
 be denied that some time
maternity
 leaves create career obstacles and
mother
 play vital role for earning money so that financial crises are
face
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the face
by
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of
 their families.
However
,
this
 can be easily overcome if
government
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the government
 made rule to give wages.
Additionally
, during
pregnancy women
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pregnancy, women
 go through physical and mental stress so that
trast
have confidence or faith in
trust
transit
 is
need
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needed
 for better health of
mother
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the mother
. In conclusion, I believe that benefits of
maternity
 leaves
are like development of children and better fitness of
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far like development of children and better fitness of mother outnumber
are like development of children and better fitness of mother far outnumbered
are like development of children and better fitness of mother far outnumber
mother
 far outnumber
then
 disadvantages.

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