Global warming is a big concern these days . Though there has been much noise made on this issue , carbon emission is not being curtailed . Are we contributor to this issue ? What solutions do you propose to counter this issue ? Discuss .

Industrialization is on

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

brink of success and technologies have become way more essential for mankind,

therefore

this

development and environment do not go hand-in-hand, even after several proclaims the situation is not changed.

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essay intends to

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

all the nooks and their concerns.

Firstly

, the movement in 1850 known as industrial revolution has made a long term impact on

number

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the number

a number

of

businesses

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businesses, however

however

, the effect is still on a top gear.

Plethora

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A plethora

The plethora

of new industries

are

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is

under construction as well where, it becomes necessary to develop industries for citizens to counterpart unemployment and for

stable economy

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a stable economy

.

This

generation is now under the practice of life convenience that it is not possible to

stop

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stop, however

however

, the demand of

product

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the product

make

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makes

this

necessary.

Further more

in addition

Furthermore

, the world is developing on the edge of a sword, extravagant use of fossil fuel is enough to make the farrago of nectar and poison in the air, emissions of toxic and carbon through industries and vehicles are increasing on

alarming rate

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an alarming rate

. Ominous, of the world temperature and there is no stoppage for that, fluctuating atmosphere working as an evidence of crime.

In contrast

, there must be a

ubiquity

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ubiquitous

solution to repeal

this

scenario, strict laws must be introduced and

government

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the government

must take the onus of

this

combat. Maximum usage of public transportation rather than private vehicle would be appreciable, alternative

of

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to

fossil fuel to limit the pollution would be benevolent exercise. To recapitulate, undoubtedly the world would be soon victim of heavy backlashes,

therefore

it is of paramount importance to stop the situation going astray, in my

opinion I

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opinion, I

think both sections are

equal

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equally

valuable for life but

masses

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the masses

must minimise carbon emission as much as possible.