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There is a big influence of peer group on children's behaviour. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? What can be done about it?

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The large influence of peer group on children's behaviour is depending to
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parent
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 children's so many children's will learn much things to
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children's
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 time in many bad activities like playing outside for hours
,
Accept space
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that's the big reason to change the children's
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 so
parent
's should must focus to
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of them or themselves
their
 children's that what they are doing is that good for our children's or not. As
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 say many teenagers are spare
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of them or themselves
their
 time in hostels so that's a make a big affects to the children's
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 because they are far to
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of them or themselves
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 home there
parent
's
,
Accept space
,
And many teenager's
also
 goes to many bad places like like video game places and many more so
that is
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them
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 daily studies so
parent
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 children's and
also
parent
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 wishes because that's
also
 make a big affect to
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 children's brain.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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