Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people are of the opinion that
music
is a good source to unite
people despite
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people, despite
having diverse cultures and ages. I strongly disagree with
this
point of view for two main reasons;
language
barriers and choice of
music
based on generational disparity. The
first
reason I tend to believe why it is not a likable way to connect people from various ages is the difference in
music
preferences of the old and new generation depending upon their
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
of popular
music
. Before the modern instruments were invented, the earlier contemporaries were much more inclined towards the kind of
music
that had meaningful lyrics.
Moreover
, it has
also
been observed that people with older traditions complain about the type of
music
youngsters are currently addicted to.
For instance
, having carried out recent research, it is
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
that 90% of the people from the current generation would choose to listen to rap rather than slow and classical
music
.
Thus
,
music
can not help diminish
this
generational gap among people.
Secondly
, not only the culture but
also
the
language
is an intangible barrier to interact with foreigners. Despite the fact that
music
is not as semantically concrete as
language
, every musical phrase creates a specific emotion that can only be followed by the people with a similar mode of communication.
In addition
to that, the range of
music
is quite wide so it provides people an option to select the
music
they understand. The University of Alberta has conducted a study which proves that
language is one the
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language is the one
the language is one
main criterion on which the popularity of
music
relies on.
As a result
, people select the kind of
music
that feels familiar to their soul and
thus
is not a good measure to join them together. To conclude,
although
some people might think of
music having
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music, having
the ability to reduce the distance
among
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between
nations, I am still persuaded that it actually has more to do with the division among them. It has been discussed in
this
essay that
language
barriers and generation gap can have a strong influence on the preferences of
music
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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