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You have a problem with your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter - Describe the problem - Say how long it has been a problem - Explain what action you want the neighbor to take

#neighbor #action
Dear Ms Rachel, I am writing
this
 letter
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to
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ti
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to
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 discuss and highlight a small issue which I have been facing living
next
 door, ' The Parking Problem'. It's been around 10 years
I
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since I
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have moved to
this
 apartment and
couple
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a couple
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 of weeks back you moved to
next
 door. I have been utilizing P/12 for parking my Toyota. Lately, to my surprise, I noticed your car was
double parked
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 and I
coudn't
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couldn't
 get it out of my way. Since I work in rotational odd shifts it
really
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 inconvenient to get any assistance to move your car out, even if possible, it would lead to late logins at work. Now, here is the proposed solution which I think can work for us both, 'Odd-Even
Rule'
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Rule
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. I use
P/12
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the P/12
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 exit side on the odd days of the month and you can park on even days. In
this
way
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,way
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 we both get
equal
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 amount of time to park on the readily accessible exit side of P/12. Let me know your thought on
this
 or a better fix. Thanks & Regards, Joey Tribianni
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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