You have a problem with your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter - Describe the problem - Say how long it has been a problem - Explain what action you want the neighbor to take

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Dear Ms Rachel, I am writing

this

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letter

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discuss and highlight a small issue which I have been facing living

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door, ' The Parking Problem'. It's been around 10 years

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since I

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have moved to

this

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apartment and

couple

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of weeks back you moved to

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door. I have been utilizing P/12 for parking my Toyota. Lately, to my surprise, I noticed your car was

double parked

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and I

coudn't

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couldn't

get it out of my way. Since I work in rotational odd shifts it

really

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inconvenient to get any assistance to move your car out, even if possible, it would lead to late logins at work. Now, here is the proposed solution which I think can work for us both, 'Odd-Even

Rule'

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. I use

P/12

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the P/12

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exit side on the odd days of the month and you can park on even days. In

this

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way

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we both get

equal

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amount of time to park on the readily accessible exit side of P/12. Let me know your thought on

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or a better fix. Thanks & Regards, Joey Tribianni

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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