You have a problem with your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter - Describe the problem - Say how long it has been a problem - Explain what action you want the neighbor to take

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Dear Ms Rachel, I am writing

this

letter

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discuss and highlight a small issue which I have been facing living

door, ' The Parking Problem'. It's been around 10 years

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since I

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have moved to

this

apartment and

couple

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a couple

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of weeks back you moved to

door. I have been utilizing P/12 for parking my Toyota. Lately, to my surprise, I noticed your car was

double parked

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and I

coudn't

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couldn't

get it out of my way. Since I work in rotational odd shifts it

really

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inconvenient to get any assistance to move your car out, even if possible, it would lead to late logins at work. Now, here is the proposed solution which I think can work for us both, 'Odd-Even

Rule'

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Rule

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. I use

P/12

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the P/12

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exit side on the odd days of the month and you can park on even days. In

this

way

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we both get

equal

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amount of time to park on the readily accessible exit side of P/12. Let me know your thought on

this

or a better fix. Thanks & Regards, Joey Tribianni

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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however
although
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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

178 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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