Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?  What other measures do you think might be effective?

Well, In my opinion increasing the
price
of
petrol
won'
t
solve the issue of growing traffic, as people are used to travel by car or bike and they don'
t
want to face any difficulties like, changing the trains at various locations to reach the
destinaton
the place designated as the end (as of a race or journey)
destination
of travelling or poor connectivity between two destinations. I
also
think that increasing the
price
of
petrol
won'
t
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the
pollution
level, as people will be using cars or bikes to travel.
For instance
, In Delhi the government started an odd-even scheme to control the
pollution
level.
This
scheme was related to driving odd numbers vehicles on
odd number date
Suggestion
an odd number, date
an odd number date
but the result of
this
scheme wasn'
t
quite
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
. So,
untill
up to, before the time
until
and unless people are taking the problems faced by
pollution nothing
Accept comma addition
pollution, nothing
can be done to avoid it.
Thus
, the problems faced by pollutions can only be cured when people start planting trees and taking the crisis seriously.
Moreover
, increasing the
price
of
petrol
won'
t
make any difference in the traffic or
pollution
, rather it will start
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
the pocket of an individual. So, in my opinion to overcome these problems the government should start making some roads and providing a better
connectivity
Suggestion
connection
between places, keeping the trains and buses clean.
Also
, increasing the number of trees and plants, turning
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
the engines in traffics and on signals, using environment friendly products and not burning crackers people can overcome the problems faced by pollutions.
Therefore
, I don'
t
agree that increasing the
petrol
price
is the best way to solve these issues.
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