Traffic congestion is a major problem in most large cities ,nowadays. What are the causes of traffic congestion in cities? what could the government do to reduce this problem?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In
this
day and age, several cities have a main problem with the traffic jam. Even though there are many reasons wish are caused by lots of motives, The government can solve the problems in many ways. The following paragraphs will be discussed throughout
this
essay. There are various causes of traffic jams in the cities. One reason for
this
is that more and more people are using private vehicles than public
transport
because they will get more private
also
save the time and don't have to consider about are they going to miss the bus.
For example
in the rus
Accept comma addition
example, in
h hour we have to use public
transport
with many people. Especially in some country public vehicle are not that good som
e don't h
Accept comma addition
good, some
ave the air conditioning it's can make people that using everyday sick with breath and another issue is we don't have law on buying cars. Restriction limit one automobile per one person there are
number
of personal
Suggestion
persons
personalities
Another key point is that
govermen
t can mak
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
e public
transport
be better to encourage travelor
to use
a person who changes location
travellers
travel or
public
transport
by increase
number
of whether train or bus in some location so people can access t
o all
Suggestion
Access
arae
als
o wh
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
en the
number
of people who using the public vehiclew
e can dec
Suggestion
vehicle we
rease the
number
of vehicles. In another way
govermen
t can sol
Suggestion
the government
government
ution
Suggestion
solve
solves
solved
this
problems
by proh
Suggestion
problem
ibit
for pur
Suggestion
prohibiting
chasing a new car. They can link the driver's license with ID card so it is esay to
chec
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easy
k. It's can garantee
that wi
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
ll have some group of people break the law
gove
rment can cop
Accept comma addition
law, government
law government
e with problems by decreasing petrol price or be fined. So no they can reduce the
number
of car and amount of crowded To sum up,
goverment
mitigate the problems by make the public
transport
better than it be
also
people have to help it's does not use any responsibility it's our responsibility
Submitted by Bank on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: