Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it has been proved that
reneweble
that can be renewed or extended
renewable
powers are
environmentally friendlier
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the environmentally friendly alternative
environmentally friendly alternative
an environmentally friendly alternative
environmentally friendly alternatives
alternative
for
energy
sources. I opine that encouraging more countries to the
use
of
alternative
sources of
energy
is a positive trend.
Although
fossil fuels are more accessible and easy to
use
, they have damaged the environment of our planet to a large extent.
Also
human activities have
overexploit
the fossil fuel
source
that it is going to deplete soon. Fossil fuel and
exhust
wear out completely
exhaust
fumes of the vehicle and companies
emmit
expel (gases or odors)
emit
Carboindioxide to the atmosphere which cause a depletion in Ozon layer, leading a detrimental effect on the
weather's
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weather
pattern and environment of the earth. There
are
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is
concrete evidence that global warming and climate change are the result of using of the fossil fuels as the main
source
of
energy
. On the flip side of the argument, renewable
energy
one of the
alternative
sources which is an endless, cheap and green
source
of
energy
. Promoting the
use
of wind, solar and water power to provide
energy
makes
contrubute
bestow a quality on
contribute
contributes
to protect the earth, and may mitigate the irreversible destructive activities of human in the past. Owing to the technological advancement, there are various facilities to establish tools to
use
each of
alternative
sources for human activities. Take roof solar cells as an example, that people nowadays install
in
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on
the roof of
house
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the house
to
use
the free
sun-rays
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sunray
sunrays
sunrays'
power
efficiently
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efficiency
with the aim of providing electricity of the household.
Inconclusion
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In conclusion
,
alternative
sources
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source
promotion can be beneficial for human and environment
instead
of fossil fuels as a major
source
of
energy
.
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